You look great on this shot too. This one is slightly better than the other one as the background is more unfocused. However, the ripples in the water tend to draw your eye away from you, and also your white top and the colour of your coat match the colours of the background too closely. I think the clothes you are wearing need a dark background , like a night time city scene with some strong dramatic lighting to make you really stand out. Otherwise, great pose, great look. You really have that look of a bad girl from a Bond movie.